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You give me light when darkness falls You give me hope when all is lost You give me strength when I am weak You give me everything You give me days when I give in You give me you, a special friend You give me love when needed most You give me everything My best of friends, my one true love My special gift from God above You are the days that lie ahead You are… my everything You give your hand when mine is bare You give your heart to show you care You give your time so eagerly You give me everything You give your dreams to share with me You give your touch so sensually You give your breath so I may live You give me everything My best of friends, my one true love My special gift from God above You are the days that lie ahead You are… my everything

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/24/2008 9:39:00 AM
Dear Michael: This is very beautiful, and moving. Touching. Thanks for reading my poem. I just wrote it this morning on the bus ride to my Mall Library. Much Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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Date: 9/10/2008 3:09:00 PM
this is a beautiful and a heart-wrenching poem, it speaks of passion and unconditional love, what could be more beautiful than that, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/3/2008 11:55:00 AM
a great piece of poety well written, enjoyed it.
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Date: 9/2/2008 1:57:00 AM
the repetition in this poem makes it mesmerizing ... I am enchanted... i am sure she will be too
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Date: 8/31/2008 5:39:00 PM
Just beautiful Quatrain chain poem,Michael! I've been enjoying your poetry for such a long time here now.And let me tell you now that I have this opportunity, that I'm so glad to be leaving you this feedback and letting you know it so :) God bless you! my friend and take care! Dorian
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Date: 8/30/2008 8:37:00 PM
You know my wife? Just kidding - You are a blessed man Michael and the great part is that you know it - Make a beautiful song played in a restaurant during anniversary dinner as you give her a diamond - Thats the thing dreams are made of Michael - God Bless
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Date: 8/30/2008 8:11:00 PM
Hi Michael A beautiful love song indeed! With soft background music it would be a magical! Your wife would would cherish it for life. What could be more special and enduring than that! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/30/2008 7:34:00 PM
I agree, this sounds like a beautiful love song - did you write music for it? you should, for your darling dear! she'd love it! Have a great night, love Kristin
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Date: 8/30/2008 6:43:00 PM
This should have music with it! Very good!
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