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Every Dawn

Somewhere nearly home dawn was gently breaking Just as the teardrops from your heart were waking Driving the sunset way Towards a rising day one day sets on another day's pain. Written July 2000

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/13/2018 9:14:00 PM

Soft and soulful expression of heartbreak. Beautiful poetry Virginia. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Virginia Waters
Date: 7/14/2018 6:57:00 PM

Thank you kindly Susan

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/9/2018 4:38:00 PM

Back with heartfelt congrats on your win in the contest, Virginia! Best wishes, Gershon

Virginia Waters
Date: 7/9/2018 6:26:00 PM

ty GW

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/9/2018 2:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Virginia. Well done.

Virginia Waters
Date: 7/9/2018 6:26:00 PM

thank you Line - nice to get a spot

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2018 3:54:00 AM

absolutely gorgeous imagery Virginia:-) hugs jan xx

Virginia Waters
Date: 7/9/2018 6:25:00 PM

guess pain digs it out!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 7/8/2018 1:04:00 PM

Thank you for commenting on my poem! It caused me to discover you. This is beautiful.

Virginia Waters
Date: 7/9/2018 6:24:00 PM

your very welcome and thank you

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2018 1:27:00 AM

My heart is aching … painfully beautiful poesy. ~ Gershon

Virginia Waters
Date: 7/9/2018 6:23:00 PM

as mine was then -

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/7/2018 11:09:00 AM

ohh, how soul-crushing is this lovely write, virg... grateful for your comment on my page... huggs

Virginia Waters
Date: 7/7/2018 7:05:00 PM

thanks nette, unfortunately no time to read everything and everybody here - let alone comment. Such a big site - though awesome to know poetry is still so alive in this electronic world. Love always - V

Lyric Man

Date: 7/7/2018 8:51:00 AM

Virginia.. your soft rhymes pop in this lovely work!!

Virginia Waters
Date: 7/7/2018 7:03:00 PM

smiles