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Everlasting Love

Devotion of a rare hue Canopies dusk; fashions dawn Ceaseless esteem journeys far Triumphs without doubt 04/09/2012 Diana-Marie Bombardieri For CONTEST - 1-6 lines of romance and love (Russell Sivey)

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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 4/28/2012 7:27:00 AM
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Very lovely dear Diana. I enjoyed this much.Supper belated congratulations xoxox
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Mike T
Date: 4/22/2012 2:51:00 PM
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I enjoyed this. The first line engages wonder immediately; good. I also find "canopies" as a verb to be in a similar vein, but I was momentarily confused, thinking "fashions" was a noun (but it is still effective; keep it). Aside from that, the expansive end rings of perfect truth without being maudlin. I want it to be longer but it should not be. Very very good!
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George Aul
Date: 4/18/2012 1:01:00 PM
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Very nicely written..........George
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/17/2012 7:11:00 PM
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Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Diana.
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Janette Fisher
Date: 4/17/2012 1:30:00 PM
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Many congrats on your feature this week - rgds Janette
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 4/17/2012 5:36:00 AM
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Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Diana-Marie. Love, Carol
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 4/16/2012 1:22:00 PM
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Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Diana-Marie. Love, Carol
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 4/16/2012 11:43:00 AM
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Congrats Hun on this well deserved win. Love the words. Hugs Michael
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Ralph Taylor
Date: 4/15/2012 5:19:00 PM
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Congrats on your win, Diana. Excellent. Nice going. Thanks for your kind words. hugs, Ralph
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Wilma Neels
Date: 4/15/2012 1:35:00 PM
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Diana-Marie, congratulations on your win in Russell's contest ;) Wilma
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 4/15/2012 12:27:00 PM
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Prettily said. Congratulations Diana. Love, Joyce
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 4/15/2012 8:04:00 AM
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congrats Diana on a lovely win for this brilliant beauty write luv..
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Olusegun Arowolo
Date: 4/15/2012 7:43:00 AM
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Very nice romantic piece.Congratulations on your superb win..love O.A
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/9/2012 11:14:00 PM
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A sweet romantic write, Diana. Good luck in the contest.
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