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In this godforsaken place, I felt disconnected from the climbers around me-- emotionally, spiritually, physically… Jon Krakauer pg 63 Into Thin Air EVEREST to breach topmost peak one must reach pittance of soul’s wit bodies warmth all but dead near climb’s great escape 10/27/2021 Lune (Mixed Pair) Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Date: 11/6/2021 12:48:00 PM
Seems a stronge entry for the contest. Good luck Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2021 8:16:00 PM
Thank you, Paghundu!
Date: 11/1/2021 4:37:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. I would not want to go there even though one might be able to see for miles once the top had been reached. There are some brave souls that do that sort of climb. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2021 8:17:00 PM
Climbing the mountain I climbed today was daunting enough. My nephew’s ashes were spread at the top.
Date: 10/29/2021 6:33:00 AM
Great mixed pairs; good from the beginning to the end. No surprise there.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2021 7:08:00 AM
Everest…truly inspires, boggles the mind, frightening heights!
Date: 10/28/2021 8:10:00 PM
Your haikus have inspired me tonight, Kim. (See my site today for 'A Mountain-Climber's Prayer). Thank you, my friend. ~ Peak Experiences, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2021 4:35:00 AM
Thank you! I must read!
Date: 10/28/2021 2:23:00 PM
did this one get a win? It's sure a nice one, KIm. I would NEVER attempt that climb!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2021 4:18:00 PM
No win but I did enjoy writing this after watching a National Geographic about Everest. Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 10/27/2021 2:33:00 PM
It took courage and ambition, Excellent poem, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2021 5:49:00 PM
For sure. Thank you!
Date: 10/27/2021 1:59:00 PM
Can't imagine me doing such a thing. Got to be a magnificent journey. Well said, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2021 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 10/27/2021 9:02:00 AM
You did well, Kim. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2021 9:44:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! ~ hugs
Date: 10/27/2021 8:44:00 AM
A facinating but yes it's a godforsaken place. Hope you're well Kim Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2021 9:44:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!

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