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a shapely morning holds me longer - - longer than expected i am aware that day needs me there, nothing perfected everything bare, truth in a stare the afternoon in full bloom- no sense pretending as drops of blue are ever sending . . keep me in the midnight longer, longer than expected i am aware that i am needed there with you - - each and every syllable second is needed too ___________________ ~ to be every breath you take, every move you make ~ sweet romance from the heart of me

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Date: 10/3/2020 6:31:00 PM
Lovely as a daffodil
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Date: 10/3/2020 6:56:00 PM
Awe, thank you Robert. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy
Date: 7/17/2020 12:16:00 PM
There are some mornings when we do tend to linger in thought, but it's the dreams of love that come to us only in the evening. Beautiful, Brandy! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 7/17/2020 7:33:00 PM
Carolyn, you are right. Dreams of love touch the heart even more, as evening falls. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 7/17/2020 11:51:00 AM
Beautifully crafted and created with rife imagination and intense fantasy - sensuous photo, and totally sensuous and sensitive poem. Well penned my friend. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/17/2020 7:31:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, so kind of you to leave your wonderful thoughts on my poem. Such a sweet thing to say. There is a touch of sensuality in this. Thank you for your tender words. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 7/16/2020 5:11:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/16/2020 6:58:00 PM
Thank you Pashang. I appreciate you stopping by to read this little scribble of mine. :) Brandy
Date: 7/15/2020 5:12:00 PM
this is so lovely and very touching, Brandy
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Date: 7/15/2020 7:31:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 7/14/2020 4:11:00 AM
So touching and beautiful, Brandy. Panagiota Romios
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Date: 7/14/2020 6:58:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota. Such a wonderful comment. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 7/12/2020 11:25:00 PM
"A shapely morning,"afternoon in full bloom," "each and every syllable second." So a wonderful tapestry of precisely expressed imagery Brandy. Thank you for sharing this romatic interlude!
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Date: 7/13/2020 6:20:00 PM
Sam, thank you for taking a moment to read this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts bring a smile. I appreciate you and your kindness. :) My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Date: 7/12/2020 8:52:00 PM
Pure Brandy perfection, a delight to read over and over, shaping words and phrases like a potter with wet clay. 'Keep me in the midnight longer, longer than expected' so evocative and romantic. This makes me smile, my friend. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 7/12/2020 9:19:00 PM
Such a wonderful compliment. Thank you John. "like a potter with wet clay" I am humbled. I am just scribbling from the heart. Your thoughts are so kind and tender. I am smiling along with you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 7/11/2020 7:42:00 AM
each and every syllable second... how precious, yet time waits for no one... lovely romantic poem...
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Date: 7/11/2020 7:55:00 PM
In this poem- time wraps around the heart. To be there for someone- in every moment. Of course. Thank you Silent One. :) Brandy
Date: 7/9/2020 7:54:00 PM
Beautiful write Brandy, tender moments keep us longer..
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Date: 7/9/2020 9:36:00 PM
Such moments caress the heart. Thank you Joseph. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 7/9/2020 2:03:00 PM
A wistful love very very artfully expressed. Exceptional verses, Branderz, this is one of your finest. Fave.
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Date: 7/9/2020 7:50:00 PM
Such a wonderful thing to say. I am just writing from the heart. Thank you Lawrence for your kind words. I appreciate you placing this little scribble in your favorites. :) Brandy
Date: 7/9/2020 11:37:00 AM
I sense a longing, a reaching out to someone in need. Your words tenderly wrap around me. My best to you, Brandy. Hugs, John
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Date: 7/9/2020 7:24:00 PM
There is a sweet ache within. A tender longing. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Thank you John. :) Brandy
Date: 7/9/2020 11:30:00 AM
Tender verses of romance my friend--they evoke the call of heart, eager to linger in the night..beautifully done, Brandy.
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Date: 7/9/2020 7:18:00 PM
Your thoughts are always appreciated. Love is a wonderful emotion. Thank you Vijay. :) Brandy

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