Ever

Ever held a wish in your hand, ever held a dream in your arms. Ever kissed a star just before dawn, ever seen the sunlight in her eyes. Ever been in love.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/10/2010 9:50:00 AM

ahhhhhhh yes as you can read and my last few verse LOL and still can be! Hope you enter a Cowboy or Indian westward movement poem for my contest? Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/6/2010 2:42:00 PM

Haven't seen you around in a while, Daniel. Just checking in to let you know I'm looking forward to your next poem. Love, Carolyn

David Byrne

Date: 5/4/2010 8:40:00 PM

never kissed a star but it's great none the less!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/1/2010 8:17:00 PM

Daniel ..hope all is well with u .. just stopping by to say "hi" and that I miss your lovely lines of poetry... luv..from the "Sweetheart"

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2010 3:25:00 AM

Great comparison....Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/1/2010 2:31:00 AM

Beautiful description of love, Daniel. People can relate to our romantic words. Missed you and hope all is well with your mom. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2010 2:37:00 PM

excellent write sounds interesting to me, enjoyed,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/23/2010 9:15:00 AM

Well I hope my luv is like this one u describe so beautifully and should be entered in Amy Green's contest for wishes... superb as ever Daniel..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/23/2010 6:21:00 AM

Romantic,I'm in love with your verse Mr Cheeseman. . .beautiful-Charma.