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Ever-Bright Eyes

There you speak an unspoken word within the laughs and the cries, and I hear what goes unheard deep in your ever-bright eyes. When I notice you winking there are no hidden lies, I know what you are thinking deep in those ever-bright eyes. When you look right into mine, so warmly, like the sun's rise, I can feel them brighter shine deep in my ever-bright eyes. Our hearts are forever contained in a part of us that never dies, the soul has always remained, deep in our ever-bright eyes. 4/26/2014

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/13/2014 9:35:00 AM

really nice piece Kelly, a blessing it is to read this fine piece of work.Especially ,ove your last verse as it really says so much that's important, God bless, Gordon

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/16/2014 1:47:00 AM

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Gordon! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this poem!.... Have a great day!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2014 9:59:00 PM

Kelly, just came to say hi to you. Hubbie is calling for me and I never quite have enough time here!!! thanks for commenting to my recent poetry.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/3/2014 7:09:00 AM

Our hearts are forever contained in a part of us that never dies.....I especially like these two lines..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/4/2014 9:48:00 PM

Thank you so much for the encouraging comments, Sara. I'm happy that you liked this poem. :)

Jesus Tello

Date: 4/29/2014 9:44:00 PM

HELLOOOOOOOOO Kelly!!! Just saw u had a new poem. Had not been on poetry Soup for weeks!!! I stand by what I said, you never fail to impress!! Great poem. See ya later!!! -Jose

Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/1/2014 8:39:00 PM

Hello Jose! It is good to see you here again. Thank you so much for stopping by. Your kind comments are always appreciated. See ya later! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2014 6:57:00 PM

I love poems about eyes. The windows to the soul and bright eyes are clear and unsullied!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/26/2014 3:49:00 PM

Awesome! Great poem lady :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/28/2014 2:37:00 PM

Thank you very much for the kind comments, Casarah! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/26/2014 5:16:00 AM

This is going straight into my favourites its beautiful - eyes are the windows to the soul! Hugs Jan x

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/27/2014 2:58:00 PM

Thank you so much for adding my poem to your favorites, Jan! It really means a lot to me. Hugs :)