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Evening Walk

Out walking I turned to see Twilight sneaking up on me It came on slippered feet Day whistling a soft retreat A rustling of the fairy folk Evening magic did invoke To the sun I blew a goodbye kiss Thankful for its warming bliss Listening to earth's evening song My heart rejoiced and sang along

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2011 7:30:00 PM

glad to see this one again and that it won in the contest. Congrats, Barbara.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/21/2011 11:57:00 PM

oh, barbara.... fondest congrats! :) huggs

Mike Francis

Date: 6/21/2011 8:29:00 PM

I really liked your piece! My favorite time of day. Thanks for the comment on Muse- Mike

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/21/2011 2:58:00 PM

Enjoyed the carefree piece you have penned here Barbara..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/21/2011 2:12:00 PM

Dear LNC, I know how much you enjoy your walks and hope one day you do meet the "fairy folk." LOL Things always seem magical when we are surrounded by nature's beauty. Lovely poem, dear. Sent you an email regarding the MRI results. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/21/2011 3:46:00 AM

Enjoyed this one..It has such good flow, rhythm, and rhyme..Very creative way to write about end of a day ...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2011 11:11:00 PM

So lyrical sounding and soft and sweet, ME LIKES.