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Evening Rains

Sunset's hue coats the pool's skin with fiery glitter, as raindrops ceaselessly drum everywhere my eyes can see. Scent of spring is in the air, as ripples blend on the pool's skin. Raindrops will keep on playing the rhythmic drumming, until when the skies open once again. Date Written: 8/11/2016 Date Judged: 8/15/2016 Previous Contest Name: Rain

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Date: 8/16/2016 12:22:00 PM
Congrats on your placing with this sweet and short one. :) Sunita
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/17/2016 6:14:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Sunita!! *^_^*
Date: 8/16/2016 10:57:00 AM
This is awesome imagery Teddy!Congrats on your win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/17/2016 6:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra!! *^_^* I really appreciate it!! :-)
Date: 8/15/2016 9:55:00 PM
Lovely imagery in your 'rain' poem, Teddy. Congrats on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/17/2016 6:10:00 AM
Greetings Sandra. Thank you for enjoying my piece, and applauding it!! *^_^*
Date: 8/15/2016 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/17/2016 6:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Janis!! *^_^*
Date: 8/15/2016 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Teddy, thank you for entering my contest ! Hug Eve
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/17/2016 5:59:00 AM
You are always welcome, Eve! ;-) Thank you so much for your applause!! *^_^*
Date: 8/15/2016 4:58:00 PM
Teddy, wonderful flow and imagery...congrats on your placement in the Rain contest :)-luloo
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/17/2016 4:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura, for your applause and enjoying my piece!! *^_^* I really appreciate it!! ;-)
Date: 8/11/2016 10:01:00 PM
I heard the drumming rain in your wonderful poem, Teddy. Very nice! GL in the contest:)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/17/2016 3:21:00 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying my piece, Laura!! *^_^*

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