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Evening of Romance

tangy flavor drips on a sizzled evening rosy pink… kneading nectar’s mouths like a zing of Merlot wine… to thrill warm kisses ablaze tunes in ecstasy claim juicy play of romance when twilight lips meet… intoxicated by love under blushed stars, exploding! Romance In The Night Nayda Ivette Negron Contest 8/1/2016

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/3/2016 3:29:00 PM

Beautiful and sensually romantic, Nette! Love and wine often happen to cross paths under the stars...they offer a blend of passionate intoxication! Congrats on this high flying win:) hugs // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 8/2/2016 8:54:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/2/2016 3:52:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your nice placement in this 'romance in the night' Premiere Contest. Wonderful romantic imagery. Hugs, Sandra

Tom Arnone

Date: 8/2/2016 2:18:00 PM

Those words make my mouth all wet and thirsty! Congrats on your Placement! :-)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/2/2016 11:39:00 AM

Nice write and congrats on your win. :) Sunita

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/2/2016 6:44:00 AM

Your poem has an aroma of romance!! Congrats Nette, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/1/2016 9:17:00 PM

So sweet enticing :-) good luck in the contest . Hugs Eve

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 8/1/2016 8:00:00 PM

Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/1/2016 5:27:00 PM

Now i know why i cannot win a contest anymore, when i'm up against poetry like this, nette. truly amazing tankas

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2016 4:18:00 PM

great images of romance, Nette. Loved it.

Tom Quigley

Date: 8/1/2016 1:52:00 PM

Beautiful write!

Madhupriya Shanmugam

Date: 8/1/2016 10:20:00 AM

so romantic;) enjoyed your write which took to me to a dream land..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/1/2016 7:11:00 AM

- Beautiful poem, Nette - Luck in the contest :) - Have a nice month! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/1/2016 3:59:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

James Peranteau

Date: 7/31/2016 8:28:00 PM

Tisshh! Fandamtastic my fear poet! Yikes girly.....I'm dumbfounded... Love what the nectar exposes..**smiles...have a wonderful night nette...much love, james