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Evening Music of Nature

Evening Music of Nature I was in a thrill, While watching the beauty, Of diminishing Sun, And feeling that the darkness is Slowly engulfing us. The returning birds have eloped from the sky, With their soul mates, The last of the fading Sunbeams, Too were in a hurry to touch only, The top of the trees. Only I was alone, In this serene quietness, And was trying to hear The Melodious music of loving birds, When Crickets too became more active to play their music, Seeing the fast approaching night, And no one to disturb, their mighty kingdom. Ravindra Kanpur India 13th August 2010 To view this memorable evening which I took in my Camera also I have placed the poem on My Photo My Poems series on my face book.

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Date: 8/30/2010 11:27:00 AM
Nice use of imagery. So much depth in this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 8/22/2010 12:22:00 AM
I love this one, awesome imagery! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/14/2010 2:28:00 AM
A wonderful image, Ravindra. I enjoyrd the beauty of the nature and sounds, the cricket shirps are stronger than the song of a bird. lol,, just one cricket can disturb the enjoyment of silence. Loved and enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 8/13/2010 5:53:00 PM
THE EVENING IS VERY BEAUTIFUL, RAVINDRA. LOVELY POETRY*luv~SKAT
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Date: 8/13/2010 2:14:00 PM
Great write about the songs of the evening..Good job..Sara
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Date: 8/13/2010 12:40:00 PM
Lovely time of day "returning birds had eloped" refreshing metaphor!..perhaps "have would be better? Light & Love and thanks for reading my work!
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Date: 8/13/2010 11:00:00 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Ravindra. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2010 9:58:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Ravindra. The music of the crickets, fading sunbeams, engulfing darkness -- very vividly conveyed! Love, Carolyn
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