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Evening Interlude

Rain-drenched streets gleam in the glow of the sodium lamps as the second shift waits in the bus queue, chattering like children after a Saturday matinee. Moon-bright puddles flash, and leaves tremble in the trees by the park, sent shivering by the wind's insistent edge, and the lights along the distant motorway glimmer, red, bound for the harsh, gaunt hills to the north, and white, for the cities below this ragged, redbrick town and southeast to London. The bus rumbles the people away to their homes and silence settles on this hill of dreams, where one by one the porch lights go out, the blue-grey TVs flicker off, and the neighborhood falls into a sweet and gentle sleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/7/2016 10:03:00 PM
Beautiful yet again, I am curious if the form has a meaning I did not comprehend?
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/7/2016 10:16:00 PM
LOL, I was looking for some hidden meaning! and I have done the same, even much older, great poetry!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/7/2016 10:07:00 PM
Not really... as a kid at nighttime I spent hours walking the streets of my neighbourhood and the images have just stuck in my head. No special significance as to shape... it just came out that way! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/5/2016 6:46:00 PM
Beautiful words my friend , well written indeed....hugs / / :) dalia
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/5/2016 6:56:00 PM
Thanks dalia! Much appreciated... Keith
Date: 1/5/2016 4:17:00 PM
you've painted such a vivid picture here, keith, that i can visualize (or visualise, as you might say) it perfectly. i love the "moon-bright puddles" especially...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/5/2016 6:20:00 PM
Thanks for your descriptive review! Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/5/2016 6:17:00 PM
Thanks again! You really are too kind... Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/5/2016 2:02:00 PM
the bus ride home....meaning the work day is all gone....now a drink, some tv, and some food....while the shower awaits us nude....and then the day is over waiting on the next....that's the routine of Life, so uncomplex....much enjoyed keith....
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