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Evening In the Asphalt Homeland

Around the benches the young and the not so young are gathered The bodega is open for busingess Someone is talking loudly into a cellphone disturbing the peace of the shoppers The sky is growing darker We have not as yet reached the summer solstice On the FDR drive cars whizz by rapidly Bringing their occupants towards their homes, their lives The Williamsburg bridge stretches across the East River As cars cross over on their wasy A thin veneer of hope covers the metropolitna scene Another evening has arrived Thousands head home to rest from their daily toil In the distance the sound of an ambulance reminds us of our mortality

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/20/2012 4:14:00 AM
Everyday scenes and then the haunting reminder at the end...Brilliant and descript! Right there with ya. Gwendolen
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Date: 6/18/2012 7:31:00 AM
Yes, that is a daily reminder in large cities..Good topic chosen on which to write and good presentation..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 6/17/2012 6:03:00 AM
Excellent imagery here Matthew.!!. Enjoyed
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Date: 6/15/2012 7:18:00 AM
that is really good and so true. It amazes me every time I leave to go to work and leave for home. traffic. wow. its amazing. Very good my friend
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Date: 6/15/2012 2:42:00 AM
This could work its way into a screen play Matt. Great visuals! Thank you for your comment.
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Date: 6/14/2012 12:00:00 PM
A glimpse of life in the big city. People going about their business immersed in their own private world while surrounded by a sea of others. Oblivious by choice of such suffocating closeness. A fine job here. God Bles and thanks so much for your comment onnn my latest post. Sorry haven't been around much. Puter is giving me a lot of grief freezing and skipping all over the place. Takes all the joy out of using it. God Bless, JB
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