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Even the Angels Wept

Even the Angels wept As I walked amidst stars to find my glitter fade into their twinkle, With my dears I was at war loneliness reflected in my wrinkles, Few smiles in darkness if life could sprinkle .. Heyday of life and many promises unkept, To knocks of heaven, even the Angels wept. Written May 5th, 2016 For contest by John lawless Awarded N/A Now entered for "Second chance may 16" poetry contest by Eve

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Date: 9/13/2016 11:00:00 PM
Great poem.
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Date: 7/24/2016 1:31:00 AM
Dr Upma.. Lovely win. Skat
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Date: 6/8/2016 5:43:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Upma, on your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/6/2016 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful, well-deserved win, Dr. Sharma! Such a beautiful but sad, touching piece that I enjoyed reading. Pandita
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Date: 6/5/2016 9:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/5/2016 8:50:00 PM
Dr. Upma A. Sharma, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/5/2016 8:14:00 PM
Dr. Upma, congratulations on your well-deserved win for this sad but beautiful poem in the 'second chance' contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/5/2016 7:16:00 PM
Dr. Upma, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-Luloo
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Date: 5/10/2016 4:15:00 PM
wonderful poetry Upma, just love the sentiment.
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Date: 5/6/2016 7:47:00 PM
this is really lovely, Upma. One of your best for imagery.
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Date: 5/6/2016 8:51:00 AM
Very expressive, Upma. Janice
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