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Even Rocks Can Cry

Even Rocks Can Cry Even rocks wear away with time and the demands of strength. These seemingly immoveable objects, deflectors of life’s raging torrents, sun warmed seats of contemplation, bearers of past high and low water marks. Unnoticed, they sit as observers, watching as time passes through their moment, aware, yet unaware, of the softening of edges, the smoothing of an old, once craggy face, resigned to the river’s changing moods, the wind’s cold chaffing, the sun’s yellow soothing, the moon’s cool silver chill and the cleansing joy of a spring rain. Yes, these rocks, these anchors, depended on for guidance, for protection, for the memory of the splashing joy of youth. These rocks when left too long grow lonely, shed an unseen tear. For even rocks can cry. 2/17/2014 --125 words

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Date: 2/19/2017 12:52:00 PM
It is said that if man will not praise Creator God, even the rocks and the stones will cry out. I've always assumed it was in praise; but perhaps it is in grief, who's to know? Enjoyable read with a pondering about it. Congratulations, John on your placement.
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Date: 2/15/2017 9:44:00 PM
Wow, I love this poem, John, especially the ending. The last line gave me chills! Well done and a fave for me...congrats and hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/15/2017 9:36:00 AM
wow..."Even rocks can cry..."- this really was thought provoking, which is why I love your poems so much... "silver chill"- love those two words together- greatness written...thank you and congrats :) -Luloo
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John Lawless
Date: 2/15/2017 10:14:00 AM
Thanks Laura, it was nice to have a chance to post it again. It was one of my early submittals to the soup....
Date: 6/10/2014 10:13:00 PM
This poem reminds me a lot of my Father, really well done.
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Date: 2/23/2014 7:35:00 AM
Pretty good. I liked reading it.
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Date: 2/18/2014 4:35:00 PM
John, Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments on my poem, Too Soon, My Love-Too Soon. It is a blessing to have someone of your depth and insight to see into the meaning of the poem. I truly appreciate it. Thank you again. Neva
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