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Eve Undone

Among the lilies oh so white, Naked to the morning light. I sit and watch creatures all, The snake, seminal, although so small. The globe of red I offered him, A sin of greed in shadows dim. The garden sweet, we must leave. Oh sweet innocence , how we grieve. And how it lingers , through all these years, Our tale of love, and sex, and all its fears. Yikes.. for my Adam...HG

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Date: 6/1/2010 4:52:00 AM
MY Dearest ( Eve ) Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR Win in Light and Love Deborah's Contest I think it deserved First Place LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/31/2010 9:01:00 PM
Congrats BG on your winning poem in Debbie's contest .. another great victory on your return home...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/30/2010 10:30:00 AM
Line 4 dear friend please correct "small". Light & Love
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Date: 5/26/2010 6:21:00 PM
Very nice, dear! Good luck in the contest. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/24/2010 5:55:00 AM
Thanks for the entry Barb.......soup mail
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Date: 5/23/2010 9:13:00 PM
My Dearest " EVE " : Barbara Jean, Your nakedness in the morning light Surrounds the JOY I received last night Together we watched the glow of the Moon Knowing this moment would end to soon Sinful Shadows of my Lustful greed YOUR Forever Love what I want and need The sweet fragrance of Your Innoceence Waifs through the grieving of forgotten sense Forever and Always, through all these years Our tale of Love, and sex, and all its Fears WOW..For My EVE.. Barbara Jean
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Date: 5/23/2010 8:34:00 PM
Very pretty poem. best of luck...
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Date: 5/23/2010 8:06:00 PM
VERY NICE WRITE, ENJOYED
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