Eve

I can be your sparrow if you promise not to be my cage

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/6/2022 12:57:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. May I share with you God's love, expressed in John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

Ibohal Kshetrimayum

Date: 11/21/2018 12:34:00 AM

Sparrows are always free. Love the poem.

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 6:18:00 PM

Rita, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/21/2014 12:15:00 AM

Like this short work a lot. B'Shalpm Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/1/2014 11:17:00 AM

I love, the thirst of flying free with love... Nice tanka, Rita... Hope to see more from you... Linda

Rita Odeh
Date: 4/2/2014 3:47:00 AM

Thanks, Linda for your kind feedback. Does your daily contest have to be inspired by the given photo? http://rita-odeh.blogspot.com @ritaodehnazareth