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Eve

In the almighty Yahweh, I found great favor, He formed me; shaped me; gave me the strength to savor; Midst good and bad, like a reed, my mind, did waver, I lost his grace, owing to the apple flavor...! Yet, He made me the mother of humanity, Freeing me from my pride-filled absurd vanity; Forgiving my mind-body-soul insanity, Sculptured within me a tender urbanity...! From the beginning of the cosmos till its end, He made, in each and every tongue, my name to blend; Though mortal in nature he helped me to ascend, To the heavens, my life eternally to spend...!!!

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Date: 7/5/2023 6:47:00 AM
Congrats on your placement. "In the Almighty Yahweh", or Jehovah . Glad to see you use God's name. So many don't even know it. Congrats again,
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Date: 7/4/2023 9:12:00 PM
Christuraj, congrats on your win with this creative and descriptive write on Eve! Blessings, Kim M
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/4/2023 9:53:00 PM
You are back now. Kindly write many poems. I wish to read them.
Date: 7/4/2023 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story about "Eve." Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 7/4/2023 9:54:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/3/2023 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this lovely poem, Alex.
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Date: 7/4/2023 9:54:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/3/2023 6:15:00 AM
Christuraj, CONGRATS on your win with this excellent, descriptive piece! Janice
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/4/2023 9:55:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/3/2023 1:30:00 AM
Eve is the mother of all humanity. Though she sinned against God, He redeemed her children from eternal damnation through His son's crucifixion. Congratulations Chris on your win with your beautiful poem.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/4/2023 9:54:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/3/2023 12:28:00 AM
Great take on Eve and her life, Christuraj, congratulations:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/3/2023 1:03:00 AM
Thank you very much for giving me this opportunity of participating in your contest. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/2/2023 4:27:00 AM
Wonderful. Best wishes for the contest. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/3/2023 1:03:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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