Eve

Everyone blames Eve. They believe she was the cause, effect and reason. But she was human and did not weave generational punishment on her own. We cannot leave the story there without remembering the gift she was given: free will, from her Father - the right to choose. She deserves reprieve.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Christopher Grieves

Date: 10/3/2023 9:08:00 AM

I have great sympathy with Eve, it was through kindness that Adam also ate the apple - surely she was doing the relational thing and sharing her food. This deserves a win for that reason alone and a nice poem too :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/4/2023 9:45:00 PM

Angela, congrats on your win with Eve's story! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/3/2023 1:28:00 AM

Free will, the greatest gift was given to Eve. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/3/2023 12:39:00 AM

She alone was surely not to blame, I believe, great poem, Barbara:) thank you for participating:)