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Euphoric Knighthood

I was climbing up a ladder on a day with a cool breeze purring through the roof gutters. The wind would dip and run inside the open metal canister then shoot up with the unforgiving wall at roof’s end… That upthrust would meet my rising hair with a foosh reminding me of ungifted rewards, like spinning windmills our air is happy and free while I climb the satoric rungs for a vision clearer than the ground below… Space between the thoughts is what we are trained to see And as those continents tread away from each other The mass of men’s woes storm along breathless air Like a cannonball bringing to smoke and cinder All my grasping mills, shuddering in the wind—let go! I put the ladder away and walk back into the garage. I listen attentively to my breathing as I open the screen door that leads to my kitchen that leads to my living room carpet where I will lay down and count all my blessings… …until I fall asleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/6/2010 3:11:00 AM
Very nice, Matt. Congratulations, again for making it through to the semi-finals of the October 13th Poetry soup contest. Your talent shines. Love to you, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:26:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:55:00 PM
Wish you all the best with your 2 poems, Matt ^_^--many congratulations on both accounts :)
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:37:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 11/18/2009 10:57:00 AM
Matt - congrats on being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/17/2009 8:04:00 AM
"On a clear day," eh, Matt. Congrats on this fine piece being selected. Love, daver
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Date: 11/16/2009 11:41:00 AM
Hi Matt Congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/16/2009 10:45:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Matt. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2009 11:25:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Matt.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/15/2009 6:40:00 PM
Good use of imagery for an interesting perspective. I think the world would be a better place if we counted our blessings a little more often. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/15/2009 5:47:00 PM
This reminds me that sometimes when we see things from a different perspective, it reveals the things we take for granted. Well done. Congratulations on this poem being featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/2/2009 4:04:00 PM
A very enjoyable read you have written and shared with us today. Thank you Matt. Love, Carol
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