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Eternity Within Me Touches

Waves cascade Seagulls soar, crabs scurry As sounds recede, the silence rubs Something close to eternity Within touches.
+++ January 11, 2015 Form : Verse ( 29 syllable count) Dr. Ram Mehta Second Place win Contest: Somewhere by nette onclaud

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Date: 1/16/2015 2:51:00 PM
Indeed, somewhere I'd like to be, nice one, James :)
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Date: 1/15/2015 5:06:00 AM
Isn't it amazing what nature can awake in us? A great write!
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Date: 1/15/2015 1:44:00 AM
Superb write n win Dr. Ram !
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Date: 1/15/2015 12:42:00 AM
this is really good, dr. Ram. a well deserved win. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/14/2015 9:29:00 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:25:00 AM
Beautiful write, Dr. Ram. Congrats on the win...
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:05:00 AM
Congrats on win Mehtasaab-rajat
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Date: 1/14/2015 12:58:00 AM
Congrats on the win Dr. Ram...huggs
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Date: 1/13/2015 11:35:00 PM
Very beautiful lines, best wishes.......
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Date: 1/13/2015 11:04:00 PM
Beautiful, Dr. Ram...reads like a dream. Congrat to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/13/2015 8:52:00 PM
Dr. Ram Mehta, congratulaitons on your win, a still life painting with your pen.7 Blessings
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:36:00 PM
That sounds great! I would enjoy that somewhere! Grats on your win!
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Date: 1/13/2015 4:58:00 PM
What a lovely, winning write, Dr. Ram ! Congratulations on your placement !
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Date: 1/13/2015 2:39:00 PM
beautiful imagery sounds idyllic - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/13/2015 2:02:00 PM
Hi Dr. Ram, stopping back to congratulate you on your win! Sandra
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Date: 1/13/2015 1:00:00 PM
congratultions Dr. M on this winning poem well done
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Date: 1/11/2015 7:13:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Dr. Ram, that presents such a beautiful vision of your "somewhere" by the beautiful ocean that speaks to you of eternity. Good luck in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 1/11/2015 4:38:00 PM
I can smell the scent of salty air, and the beauty of the sea ! Lovely poem, Dr. Ram :)
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