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Eternity In Hell

The things I did on Earth could've gotten me many years in jail. I thought I got off scott free but now I'm spending eternity in Hell. I stole, cheated people and twice I committed rape. My eternal soul was damned, there was no escape. These flames are eternal and much hotter than regular fire. I would've done better if I'd known that this situation would be so dire. The agony is indescribable as the flames burn my skin. They keep burning me over and over, there is no end. The fire keeps getting hotter and hotter. I'd give anything for just one drop of water. The evil things I did on Earth were terrible to do. If you're evil, change or the same will happen to you. (THIS IS A FICTIONAL POEM BUT REALITY FOR SOME PEOPLE.)

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Date: 3/5/2012 9:51:00 PM
Randy, yes,,, some can base life as hell.... one can only try to avoid the burn..always..pd
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