Eternity Glows

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unrhymed quatrains

Circle of a world you warmly surround me Holding visions of a dream Melting chocolate to the soul Cupping hands together captures pulse beats awakening sunshine through misted bridge promise dewdrops each morning The eyes opening crystals those of a deep ocean wave takes hold Satin touching softly velvet silk pearls washed pure fragrance Within a starlight kisses cheeks singing rivers in delight Beholding you beautiful Arrowhead of Cupid Striking Surf falling down deeply sweeping winds rising an angel the heart's wings flying with grace sparkling back

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2015 12:54:00 PM

- Ohhh .... this is "my" poem dear Liam! - Really romantic and beautiful - It will be in my collection - I wish you a lovely and peaceful weekend :) - hugs xxxx // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/13/2015 12:53:00 PM

Hi Liam!A most very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I truly enjoy it! A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet !Magnificent! Just delightful!I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding.Just perfect!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Always keeping you in my prayers.Please take good care of yourself always.Keep your faith!Keep your love n' hopes n' follow your dreams always too, Liam.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^