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Eternity

Close your eyes and imagine this Eternal bliss Your every wish At your finger tips No weak to heal The virus is wilt Death is jilt ETERNITY There’s more Imagine the prophets making up your social sphere You and your Father with ages the same Imagine showing off your book with no shame Imagine nights with the tortoise himself telling his tales Under moonlights, with no mosquito to bite And there’s more Jesus and Muhammad (PBUH) Being alive To slice Our lies And make them right By being the light We’d like To shine Making binds That tie The lineage of man Being brother to all and all are yours Cause you are from them and they from you And there’s more No night of mares Of dreams that scare The young adhere To all they care But all they care Is the praise of the one who gave them more And still more Hosanna Hosanna At the top of our voice No vice To hinder our price Of life Without lies or lice What an excellent master Of a miserable slave You forgot And he forgave He gave you guidance And you still strayed? And more and more and more ‘ETERNITY’ A gift misplaced.

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Date: 9/10/2014 7:13:00 PM
Hi Mubarak, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/10/2014 4:24:00 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Mubarak - I choose your first great written poem ! - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Adeola Mubarak
Date: 9/10/2014 4:58:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne, your comment has really made my day, though I'm just getting to know my ability and passion for poem, hoping to do great things with it. Nice meeting you.

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