Eternity

Eternity Carry me on your shoulders. I'm sorry; I know you're getting older. Too much time has passed. I dearly do hope this time that strength will last. Save me still. Save me yet. Save me at a will. Save me without a regret. I don't know how long this will be. I can't see eternity. My strength is nearly gone. This time I don't want to carry on. Save me still. Save me yet. Save me at a will. Save me without a regret. This must be a surprise from the look in your eyes. Time is meant to heal any wound. Isn't that also where love is learned when it has bloomed? I don't deserve it, but I pray my life, you'll preserve it. Save me still. Save me yet. Save me at your will. Save me without any regrets.

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/28/2014 4:53:00 AM

very beautifully painted piece just sang of the screen excellent pen

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/18/2014 3:40:00 PM

I love your lyrical musical rhythm. The first time I heard it... I thought it was for the contest to make a poem about PoetrySoup into a song.

Sarah Herring
Date: 6/18/2014 4:07:00 PM

Lyrics are my thing all the way. They always have been. I could write them forever and never get tired of it. There's something about a song that just moves you and reaches you entirely. No, this was the first poem I posted on here a while ago. I would have entered it but it wouldn't have fit in with the contest. Thank you for all your encouragement and wonderful words. They mean a lot!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2014 5:42:00 AM

Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,

Sarah Herring
Date: 5/28/2014 12:11:00 PM

I appreciate that. It's an honor to have it featured.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/27/2014 7:51:00 AM

Great write - well done!!

Sarah Herring
Date: 5/27/2014 8:18:00 PM

Thank you! ~Princess~

Skat A

Date: 5/15/2014 9:10:00 AM

HI PRINCESS, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Sarah Herring
Date: 5/15/2014 6:37:00 PM

THANKS!! It's great to meet you :) I love the soup already. I'm so glad you like my compositions. ~Princess

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/12/2014 11:14:00 PM

I like it.. Shows great heart, future promise and keen insight.. Bravo.

Sarah Herring
Date: 5/13/2014 2:19:00 PM

Thank you.. It's my most recent one and I wasn't sure how well it would turn out. I'm so happy you like it!

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/12/2014 1:14:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. I have found a very friendly community here; I hope you will find the same. Keep writing.

Sarah Herring
Date: 5/13/2014 2:20:00 PM

Thank you! I'm already finding a very friendly community here. I wish I found Poetry Soup yrs ago.

Jeremy Street

Date: 5/12/2014 12:36:00 PM

Ps., Rereading Your Beautiful Princesses Poem, Sweet Beautiful Girl! Humanly Speaking, I Am Somewhat Certain That 'This Flesh,' Most Definitely Was Not Meant To Be Preserved: How Could Something So Extremely Tainted Ever Expect, Such ? Yet Eternity Smiles Through Eyes Without A Face....Love, Forever She'll Bloom....Love, Jeremy *

Sarah Herring
Date: 5/13/2014 2:23:00 PM

Jeremy, you have a really good point there. :) I love the way you write. You evoke emotions that weren't there before. No, this flesh wasn't meant to be reserved, but this soul was.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/12/2014 11:43:00 AM

Nice & deep, Princess Poetry, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sarah Herring
Date: 5/13/2014 2:26:00 PM

Hey Linda! Thanks, it's nice to meet you! I entered your contest. I was going for deep. I hoped it would be understandable. I can see that it is. :) Haha! I love it :) I have many more poems for all to read.

James Hyler

Date: 5/12/2014 11:06:00 AM

Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart

Sarah Herring
Date: 5/13/2014 2:28:00 PM

You're welcome. It touches my heart that it touched yours. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2014 2:27:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Princess :) - I choose your first sweet written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)