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Below is the poem entitled Eternity which was written by poet Benjamin David. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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As he began to kiss her, she stood in awe with the most pearly poise, mirroring the petals of a primrose that danced with an evening zephyr she once loved. Her cheeks reddened like the rose as she tasted his lips and her smile glistened with a sparkling lustre. She closed her eyes once again and approached his mouth with the most sightly smile.
As they kissed, she began to recite his poem in her heart and continued it's melody but for all eternity:

"Caressing cue in sky-lit blue 
In eternal dreams I long for you 
Dancing dew's red poured petal
Glancing pew as pollens soared settle"

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  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:37:00 PM
    Awwww so romantic...congratulations

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 5:10:00 PM
    Congrats on your win!! I like the poem within the poem.

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 3:29:00 PM
    Benjamin congratulations on your excellent win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful poem, and look forward in reading more. Welcome to PS. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 1:39:00 PM
    Hi Benjamin ;-) Congratulations!!! Thank you for entering one of my latest contest. please enjoy all the other winners who took their time in entering the same contest you did. you can find the list on the -Contest Winners: Member area- or you can visit my newest blog called ""from HEART to HEART ..."" stop by if you like. always & forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 10:11:00 AM
    Sweet sweet and sweet... must I say more. the imagery stands under the loveliest thought ever*luv ~ SKAT ~