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Eternity

All this introspection gets too much, crushing you under its own gravity, drawing you inwards. Even the senses are captive to its cause, the head a dark, claustrophobic hole. Then the world miraculously intervenes with an afternoon, blowing leaves in circles about your heavy feet as if to tickle and bend solemn lips into a begrudging smile. Then the unexplainable, a sense of something escaping, glancing off the ordinary into eternity and almost embarrassingly, you give a little skip.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/4/2023 6:48:00 AM
AH,, a reflection on the lost art of skipping..I worked on some large construction projects and in the midst of "managerial mania" would ask...."HEY! HAVE YOU EVER HAD THE UNCONTROLLABLE URGE TO LET YOUR LIMBS FLY FREELY AND SKIP MERRILY ACROSS THE JOBSITE??"
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/5/2023 5:26:00 AM
Should imagine such a call to freedom went down well with the riveted attitude of the powers.... Apprecuate yr comments John....indeed the "skip" serves as a gesture of defiance.
Date: 6/4/2023 6:30:00 AM
Oh how I love the ending of this one Paul! An absolute delight! I'm smiling reading it and imagining you kicking your heels :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/5/2023 5:18:00 AM
Thanks DD for your comments....can still manage a modest heel lift...take care

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