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Eternally Lost

A vision of prayer for a drop of rain thoughts of a plan to save his lost a wisp of dream all the while insane thoughtful for a simple hope grounded in eternal loss reflected to the universe an open sore is salted an abyss separates all and tomorrow is here knock knock and only the wind replies knock knock and weeping takes seat the man of eternal regrets who finds at last what once he refused to seek

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/29/2009 10:52:00 PM
A haunting vision is created here, Brian. I like, "A vision of prayer for a drop of rain". Well done! Donna G.
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Date: 1/28/2009 6:18:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Brian. Hope you will continue writing and sharing your excellent poetry with us. Love, Carol
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