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Eternally

Even thought I know Mom, eternal you r e p o s e- every time each time elegant old women entice me to recall . . . Embrace me dear friends, for enduring is this grief. ______________________ September 16, 2016 Poetry/Pleiades/Eternally Copyright Protected, ID 16-829-521-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Pleiades E sponsor, Kim Merryman Fifth Place

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Date: 9/23/2016 12:21:00 AM
A great tribute. Ver well written, Kai
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Date: 9/22/2016 7:24:00 PM
very well done, and exactly the type of word I would have expected from your dear heart. and congrats!!
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Date: 9/22/2016 1:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Constance :)
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Date: 9/22/2016 12:47:00 PM
- I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate you B.W. - Lovely and touching - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/22/2016 8:53:00 AM
back with my congrats lovely lady :)-luloo
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Date: 9/21/2016 8:36:00 PM
A touching and sad write, Constance. A well written Pleiades! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 9/17/2016 2:53:00 PM
beautiful lovely Broken Wings!!! (soupie from me :)
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Date: 9/17/2016 2:21:00 AM
some genuine sentiments written with passion.Brilliant Broken Wings.
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Date: 9/16/2016 8:06:00 PM
Engaging piece BW, best wishes in the contest...
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