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Eternal Winter

Eternal Winter As you stand in that lonely field, snow falling in drifted memories, chilled winds collecting in the corners of your mind, footprints leading neither here nor there in wandering dance steps to a sorrowed tune hearing monochrome clouds whisper words in echoes of torment that never seem to end, lingering somewhere in the past, on this cold December morning when the day feels as if it is your last. Know that as you gaze to the heavens, leaving frozen teardrops scattered on the stark white landscape, this warmth you feel wrapping tenderly around your shoulders, caressing your heart in springtime promises is me. Floating on a tiny snowflake amidst the many crystalline forms, yet glistening brighter, finding you, touching you, loving you, on even the coldest days of this eternal winter Happy first day of winter

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Date: 12/21/2016 5:09:00 PM
Beautiful written Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 5:21:00 PM
Thanks so very much Gary.
Date: 12/21/2016 2:20:00 PM
I could read this over and over.. Warms the heart.. Faving it dear friend..
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Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 2:34:00 PM
Thank you so very much Arlene. I am happy you enjoyed this one. Thank you for the fave.
Date: 12/21/2016 1:35:00 PM
Wow Chris. I love this. A favorite for sure! Thanks for sharing! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 2:33:00 PM
Thank you so very much Heidi, I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 12/21/2016 12:13:00 PM
There is hope even on the bleakest of days.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 2:33:00 PM
There always is my friend. Thank you so much
Date: 12/21/2016 9:48:00 AM
This poem brings so much warmth to anyone who is lonely or feeling lost...Such comfort and love spilling tthrough your pen.Happy first day of Winter...Dear Winter :).A fave
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Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend. Your kind words are always so appreciated by me. I hope you stay warm all winter.
Date: 12/21/2016 9:33:00 AM
It's a strangely comforting thought in sadness, having someone to watch over you with warmth in seemingly everlasting winter time.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 11:45:00 AM
Thanks so very much Darren. I am happy you liked this one.

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