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Eternal Love

spring blossoms’ scents carry as we hold hands young lovers with dreams of lasting passion little attention is paid to the questions: will this love last? will we always feel this ardor? after marriage a new type of love is learned wee faces, gifts from heaven, bring smiles but questions become more clear will we live to see them grow? will we be able to provide for them? unconditional is the nature of true love partners who share life’s challenge brave the winter together compromise is the key to harmony and answers are found regardless of the pain encountered affection sees us through the storms passion changes forms, but true love lasts eternally *Entry for Michael’s contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/30/2012 1:26:00 PM
WISH YOU A VERY VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!
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Date: 9/16/2012 11:01:00 AM
Hi Carolyn,how are you ?Hope to see another poem from you soon!....kashinath.
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Date: 6/11/2012 4:40:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 5/14/2012 3:47:00 PM
WOW Carolyn , no other word for this poem but brilliant , every line is perfect.Anne
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Date: 5/13/2012 6:12:00 PM
Eternal Love, is there really any other, Smile, no, Just Precept Love then the human concept of it. Relationship need to changs occasionally, but we don't stop loving each other. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/13/2012 1:16:00 PM
A true reflection of love, you said it so eloquently Carolyn.. All the best with this beauty for MJF's contest ;) love Wilma
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Date: 5/13/2012 12:15:00 AM
Beautiful words about the kind of love that lasts forever. I have learned this lesson recently. True love forgives and gets you through difficult times. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest. God bless you. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 5/12/2012 3:15:00 PM
It's a great job done my friend, loved always, bl
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