Eternal Light

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unrhymed quatrains

With peace and love I kneel a lamb possessed by the wolf within my own darkness howls A son of the Father Bowing the head to his mercy Grace in shame a sinner weeps who bit from the forbidden fruit Knowing it's agony in the garden of life's sufferings Seeking his forgiveness Oh Most Holy Lord Always you dwell God most high Almighty inside the heart Light of Our Creator there is no good inside Dark nights of a soul's pain tears of remembrance As you sit with me alone I grow stronger in faith

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Miraj Raha

Date: 9/20/2016 7:01:00 AM

Hi Liam,you have shaken my very foundation I have about almighty, it's a difficult endeavor to keep faith in our holy lord, but these divine lines have boosted my faith to become a faithful child of His.Brilliantly well done.God bless you.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/19/2016 7:22:00 PM

Hi Liam! Wow! A very sad,profound but very beautiful poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.So deep, sad, heartfelt n' can feel your pain in this piece too.All so very beautifully written in all its sadness n' it makes me so very sad n' breaks my own heart in pieces just thinking of anything or anyone hurting you in any way at any time, past or present, and you're not really alone, Liam.And the Lord and his angels are with you always too.Just praying here now more than ever that you will be fine in all.Excellent piece!Just beautiful!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot that you're really okay in everything,Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you here in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^