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Eternal Darkness

Eternal darkness-I did seek How sweet, the taste of suicide And I finally learned On the day that I died Then some hot-shot doctor With all of his gall Saved my wretched life But what of my damned soul? 10/20/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/10/2017 3:19:00 AM
Perfect! Love this one! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/15/2015 9:38:00 PM
Hi Kiley, Nice to see you on Nate's winning list. Congrats... Love SKAT
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Date: 10/14/2015 7:54:00 PM
A unique take and a haunting message- what of that soul? Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/14/2015 5:31:00 PM
Unique poem. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/13/2015 11:44:00 PM
Wonderful take on the theme Kiley with this superb winning write! Big congrats!
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Date: 10/13/2015 9:42:00 PM
I would have given this a high score if your wording was a little more poetic on the last four lines. However, it was the best. ' thank you. Nate
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Date: 9/30/2015 1:13:00 PM
Intense, Kiley! Interesting philosophical and religious undertone.
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