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Eternal Breath

The air is full of mourning although the years have past, My tears still flow like waves upon a rolling vast ocean; I asked God to take my treasure in his trust for all time, My sweet cat now slumbers in the silent dust. Heavenly angels watch his still soft eternal repose, I go there often and just sit, remember him and weep; A moss draped stone upon the emerald green grass, The only symbol of his existence on this earth. He came to me a stray lost, starving and alone in the world, Filled with utter fear and total distrust for all of mankind; Ever so slowly a loving relationship and an eternal bond, Death is the end of life but the love lives on. I watched his slow breathing all that long, long night, And when the sun rose high, he passed through the gate; In Paradise, I imagine him waiting so quietly for me, One day, I will hold him again to my heart. ___________________________ November 1, 2013 Poetry/Elegy/Eternal Breath Copyright Protected, ID 11-516-691-01 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France For the Standard contest, Eternal Breath, sponsor, Gail Angel Doyle, Judged 2013 1st Place _________________ Featured poem June 29, 2014

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Date: 11/30/2013 8:16:00 AM
Sad yet full of hope. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/28/2013 5:28:00 AM
so poignantly sad yet beautiful congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/27/2013 2:55:00 PM
I think animals have souls too! :) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/27/2013 3:56:00 AM
congratulations on your top spot xx
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Date: 11/26/2013 9:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Constance
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:47:00 PM
Yes love doesn't stop at death...lovely win...congratulations
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:39:00 PM
This is so personal , it really brings me to a time where I said goodbye to early to my Grandson , Love lives on~
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:18:00 PM
Broken, that is awesome how everyone got a first place... Now that's a fun loving way of saying. Back Off all you haters, it's my contest and I do and enjoy what I want. Love Gail, for that.... Every poem I read was beautiful so far.... ~Hugs & Congratulations with your "Eternal Breath" awesome win... Always ~ LINDA
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Date: 11/26/2013 2:34:00 PM
- Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/3/2013 10:38:00 AM
awww, such a heartfelt write, Constance. I must finish writing something for your contest - such an emotional subject. Hope you and the kitties are having a great day x
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Date: 11/1/2013 9:21:00 AM
Very touchy and moving , sentimental as well as emotional expressions of deep love, Constance
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Date: 11/1/2013 9:21:00 AM
absolutely THE BEST one I have seen yet, constance. I feel ya in this one. How I missed my Callie cat those first few years after her death. This one is perfect for Elegy contest too.
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