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Eternal Breath

I am lost without you
My cries longing for your touch.
I scream in anger "I Need You!"
Why did you have to go?
My heart is broken, like shattered glass 
into a million pieces.
 I lay in agony on the floor.
Can't eat or sleep, time stands still.
Waiting but knowing you will never come
back to me.
Pictures scattered with tear drop stains.
Nothing can seem to heal my pain but time. 
Until I take my dying breath your memories
I will keep.

Lisa Gomez

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  1. Date: 11/15/2013 6:15:00 PM
    very moving and powerful words that hit the heart

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Sad and romantic piece.

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 8:29:00 PM
    Wow what a powerful loss you've encountered,,,,,all the best to you

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 4:39:00 AM
    Love it and can relate be well my dear.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 5:47:00 PM
    Very deep with so much sincerity,, awesome poetry

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 12:33:00 PM
    - Proficient, Lisa - Touching written - Good luck in Gail Contest! - A little difficult topic to write about, I think. - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 1:10:00 AM
    Sounds like you are besotted by this bloke, but life heals. Just remember you lived without him before you met him. I really enjoyed your words, my friend, keep writing and I'll read...Peter

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 11/2/2013 1:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry Lisa, I got the wrong end of the stick, But now I understand...good read I say again...peter
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:35:00 PM
    Time hurts ... and heals! Ty 4 sharing.

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 12:38:00 AM
    The pain pierces the heart