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Eternal Bliss

Eternal Bliss Aging leaves predestined to fall Deafening spectral colors spectacle Mind weakening desiccate organic skin Imperceptibly rising from within Snowstorms drape ebbing spring Divine wind cradles vulnerable wing Heart dying repose upon mystic abyss Absolution bestows eternal bliss Penned: 2017 West Palm Beach Florida USA

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Date: 3/9/2022 11:14:00 AM
Your interpretation of this poem is "spot on" Valsa! You are humane, intelligent, and an enlightened spirit. I always look forward to hearing your thoughts. Thanks as always!...ab
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Date: 3/4/2022 9:52:00 PM
As aging leaves will definitely fall, the aging body also will have to surrender to death once. But if we gain absolution from all guilt, we are assured of eternal bliss ! Your poems are too profound to be interpreted
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Date: 7/21/2021 11:23:00 AM
Nature is filled with color just like this write. From snow white ground cover to the pretty leaves in the fall. Have a blessed day colorful day..................
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Date: 7/21/2021 1:51:00 PM
Thanks again Paula G.! Wishing you good health...ab
Date: 7/5/2021 5:57:00 PM
You are the profounder propounder, Anselmo. Kudos, Gershon
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 7/6/2021 3:39:00 PM
Really appreciate your warm and uplifting words G.W.! Thank you!!...ab

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