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Eternal

I’ll sleep when I die Sleep when I die Go out like Dad Couldn’t speak when he died The look in his eyes Like a newborn Wishing for words All the mistakes Hindsight really is 20/20 So was the price Of that glassine Every ounce of hope Extinguished In a swift rush to the brain Green light went flat There was no more Pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/21/2015 1:45:00 PM
- Welcome to P -Soup, William :) - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I see you have already posted several poems - Enjoy a place with many different "poets" - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/18/2015 11:58:00 PM
WOW, eternal does not sound bad after reading this. Love it, William, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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William Hernandez
Date: 6/19/2015 12:10:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words SKAT. I'm already feeling very welcome here on poetry soup. This is my first time sharing my poetry and it's awesome to hear positive feedback. I look forward to our poetry friendship. One Love. William H.
Date: 6/18/2015 11:32:00 PM
William, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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William Hernandez
Date: 6/18/2015 11:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome. I'm looking forward to bettering my work and this seems like a great website. Thanks again for your friendship.

Book: Shattered Sighs