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Essence of Your Love

Where refrains of fate moans a Wedding song And pledging “I do “is one vow adorned. The evening tides brush this ache quite lonely; Stars whisper, " Dream of us; there lies the key." Your shadow turns, I feel your air once more As essence of love wraps me like before. Essence Of Your Love Contest: Gail Doyle by nette onclaud: 1/29/2014

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Date: 5/29/2014 2:32:00 PM
Love is flourishing through all the verse..:) Weee kilig ..:) Late congratulations :)
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Date: 2/26/2014 6:29:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations with your beautiful essence of love win. Have yourself a good one. Love ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/21/2014 10:30:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 2/21/2014 4:20:00 AM
Lovely write on the essence of love and congrats on the fine win, nette
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Date: 2/21/2014 4:14:00 AM
Well composed perfect Nette ! Deserved great win congrats !! Loved reading each line !!
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Date: 2/20/2014 10:24:00 PM
you really captured this theme, Nette. Another congrats for you. Fantastic win!
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Date: 2/5/2014 4:13:00 PM
Wonderful flow N.O....enjoyed//Sinclair reading this piece twice!!
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Date: 2/2/2014 8:48:00 AM
I smell here mystery of love. Loved much the lines of beautiful sensational words "Our glances touch, a never ending............... .....And pledging “I do “is one vow adorned", in between everything happened in hearts. Good luck, my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 1/30/2014 11:36:00 PM
yet another contest "Essence of your Love" and they're only getting better and better. Hi Nette, What a romantic and brilliant poem! I love it from the first line till the last. I am a Romantic and I can really feel the love in your words! Good luck in the contest. :) xoxo
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Date: 1/30/2014 9:18:00 PM
This is very beautiful and it will do good in the contest. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 1/30/2014 6:24:00 PM
Bravo loved reading this write you have warmth, emotion and it has a dreamy quality to it. great job here cheri
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Date: 1/30/2014 6:17:00 PM
I think this will do very well Nette. I like the mood you have created with this ominous romantic piece.
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Date: 1/30/2014 4:22:00 PM
I read this, then i ponder on the Essence of your poetry,,, and how lovely it is....
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Date: 1/30/2014 4:13:00 PM
awesome one for the essence of love, Nette. I don't know if I will even get home in time tonight to get mine entered!!
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Date: 1/30/2014 1:04:00 AM
Stunning . A delightful read . Thank you for making the start to my day so beautiful.
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Date: 1/29/2014 11:07:00 PM
Wow!! Sweet , awesome , delightful....all fitting words to describe this beauty, Nette! A definite winner to me and I'm sure that Gail will fall in love with it too! Well done...and no surprise there either! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/29/2014 10:26:00 PM
Wow, this is an incredible and awe inspiring write my friend! You sure know how to impress Nette! I surely loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/29/2014 6:25:00 PM
Really astounding and sad.The last stanza is just a dynamic ending for this.
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Date: 1/29/2014 3:24:00 PM
a true poem of love so poignantly expresses Nette gl in contest Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/29/2014 2:12:00 PM
Such a musky air filled with love's essence sweet Nettie.Always a pleasure to read!!!
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Date: 1/29/2014 1:29:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for stopping by..It is very expressive and creative work that you have penned...Sara
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Date: 1/29/2014 1:01:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Nette !!!! - Love it!! - Luck in contest, hope you win. - Have a nice day ... many huggs - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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