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Across the hills that sometimes taste the night
Your outline flits  beneath clouds that ignite,
Our glances touch , a never ending shade
Where milestones linger on joys that cascade.
Till refrains of fate moans a Wedding song
And pledging “I do “is one  vow adorned. 

Past river bend , waters spill dreams away
My  thoughts arise  in need of much to say
When evening tides brush this ache quite lonely;
Stars whisper, " Dream of us; there lies the key."
The knob is turned, I feel your breath once more
As essence of love wraps me like before.

To hold the moonlight in your eyes and gaze
Unto time now buried in past embrace;
I sigh and let heaven pamper my heart 
While candles flush as they did from the start.
To grasp all seasons making life complete
You hover around, musky air I greet.

Essence Of Your Love Contest: Gail Doyle
by nette onclaud: 1/29/2014

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  1. Date: 5/29/2014 2:32:00 PM
    Love is flourishing through all the verse..:) Weee kilig ..:) Late congratulations :)

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 6:29:00 PM
    Nette, Congratulations with your beautiful essence of love win. Have yourself a good one. Love ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 2/21/2014 10:30:00 AM
    This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

  1. Date: 2/21/2014 4:20:00 AM
    Lovely write on the essence of love and congrats on the fine win, nette

  1. Date: 2/21/2014 4:14:00 AM
    Well composed perfect Nette ! Deserved great win congrats !! Loved reading each line !!

  1. Date: 2/21/2014 12:39:00 AM
    Congrats yet again on a well deserved win. Ron

  1. Date: 2/20/2014 10:24:00 PM
    you really captured this theme, Nette. Another congrats for you. Fantastic win!

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 4:13:00 PM
    Wonderful flow N.O....enjoyed//Sinclair reading this piece twice!!

  1. Date: 2/2/2014 8:48:00 AM
    I smell here mystery of love. Loved much the lines of beautiful sensational words "Our glances touch, a never ending............... .....And pledging “I do “is one vow adorned", in between everything happened in hearts. Good luck, my lovely friend, bl

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 11:36:00 PM
    yet another contest "Essence of your Love" and they're only getting better and better. Hi Nette, What a romantic and brilliant poem! I love it from the first line till the last. I am a Romantic and I can really feel the love in your words! Good luck in the contest. :) xoxo

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 9:18:00 PM
    This is very beautiful and it will do good in the contest. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 6:24:00 PM
    Bravo loved reading this write you have warmth, emotion and it has a dreamy quality to it. great job here cheri

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 6:17:00 PM
    I think this will do very well Nette. I like the mood you have created with this ominous romantic piece.

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 4:22:00 PM
    I read this, then i ponder on the Essence of your poetry,,, and how lovely it is....

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 4:13:00 PM
    awesome one for the essence of love, Nette. I don't know if I will even get home in time tonight to get mine entered!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 6:47:00 AM
    Oh weddings can be such fun and joy, both my brother and my sister are getting married, four months apart this year, I am looking forward to sharing their joyous moment this poem reminded me of this, thank you my dearest, a sweet hug for you flying to your destination, xxx

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 4:09:00 AM
    What a gorgeous write. You have the touch my dear. Good luck in the contest. Please be kind and drop by and give me your rating on a poem called "Through my window". Yes did not put it in. Would love your honest opinion here. Take care Ron

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 1:04:00 AM
    Stunning . A delightful read . Thank you for making the start to my day so beautiful.

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 11:07:00 PM
    Wow!! Sweet , awesome , delightful....all fitting words to describe this beauty, Nette! A definite winner to me and I'm sure that Gail will fall in love with it too! Well done...and no surprise there either! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 10:26:00 PM
    Wow, this is an incredible and awe inspiring write my friend! You sure know how to impress Nette! I surely loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!