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Essence of Time

Essence of Time Time wheel for fortunates, Passion on zeal vibrates ! Written October 12th, 2014 By Dr. Upma A. Sharma For contest 'In the essence' by Nette onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 7:43:00 PM

Nice one. For me, wheel and zeal , the internal rhymes, are a lot stronger than fortunates and vibrates.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/12/2014 1:09:00 PM

A fine entry in that contest. Best of luck my friend. Hard to rate such a short poem but giving this one a 7 for the zeal line alone!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/12/2014 11:29:00 AM

Well done dear...hugs Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 11:18:00 AM

Love the rhyming Dr Sharma good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/12/2014 11:00:00 AM

Time wheel for fortunates....ha..nice.