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Essence

She left without saying goodbye She left no forwarding address No more tears, She left no I'll call you Only her essence in both forms Male and Female,her smile,her eyes She left me a brighter tomorrow She left her memories SHe left her essence,her scent She left me a reason to smile instead of cry....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/24/2010 3:04:00 PM
i like the happy twist, the sence of moving on, maybe. and the sad twist i can relate to. but the way...i don know, it kinda confuses me...
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Date: 8/8/2009 11:20:00 AM
Sad poem, i would rather she stayed if she left behind those lovely attributes, enjoyed this one Cecilia>>James
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Date: 4/29/2009 1:46:00 PM
I like the positive twist in this one. The essence of a relationship....yes! Love, daver
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