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Esquiline Nine Lives of Rome

I stand alone on guard Upon this ancient wall I see the city's now aflame Rome has raised its final curtain call This world will never be the same The Goths have crested The seventh hill They killed my son and my wife I guard nothing But I'm standing 'Still' Until they come to take my life I do not know What the future yearns Will there be another Rome? And will it last "Till I return To once more call it home And will it make The same mistakes To cause the same collapse To rise again Until it breaks Perhaps, perhaps, perhaps By Jerrius Curtius Minimus

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Date: 6/17/2014 12:24:00 PM
I liked this one, Jerry. The thoughts of a soldier that must stand for the principles that guide his life. A wise man that hopes his homeland will not make the same mistakes again. Very nice, Jerry..... Robert.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 6/19/2014 5:52:00 AM
Thank you Robert, like always I value your comments.
Date: 6/16/2014 5:23:00 PM
Ahh, I see you did take the bait, "Jerrius." You have a very thought-provoking and well-penned entry for the Roman Legion contest and I think Isaiah will like it as much as I do. You made yours more "personal" and that always adds to a poem's impact. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 6/16/2014 6:12:00 PM
Actually Carolyn I did not enter it into the contest, it is definitely N/A, but your poem did inspired mine,Thanks

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