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Surprised by sharp reflection’s sudden glance His dreaming depths awaken to the real Stark visage draws him in its raptured trance Square figure’s piercing slate blue eyes reveal Young vain lad deep within begs him to flinch Pretensions of youth scurry from hard light Yet fear will not cow him to give an inch Reflected nose to his, he stands forthright Time’s telltale gray flecks ‘round wan scar betray lean, harried features sharpened by the miles Yet turquoise buoyance in him does outweigh thin sun-baked wrinkles deepened by his smiles To depths, his older eyes can truly see the dauntless, yet soft soul the boy can’t be 8/10/16

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Date: 9/24/2016 2:47:00 PM
Tom, love your poem congratulations on your win! As we grow older we still feel the same as we were younger , but that dumb mirror keeps bringing in some imposter... :( Hugs Eve
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Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:48:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 9/24/2016 2:41:00 PM
lovely Sonnet Tom, rally loved this one :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:48:00 PM
Thanks, Luloo!
Date: 9/24/2016 11:11:00 AM
I must own that same mirror, Congratulations Tom...
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Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:48:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie!
Date: 9/22/2016 1:42:00 PM
TRULY SUPERB SONNET MY FRIEND.. Our youth so often again sought is wasted.. For only if we could carry back the wisdom gained from life's many experiences would any hope of living better be possible. Memories of loves, family are true treasures but the living now is just as important as the living was back then. A gem my friend, a true gem..added to my fav list.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:49:00 PM
Thank you, Robert! Appreciate it!
Date: 9/20/2016 5:27:00 PM
I used to think I still looked like I did 30 years ago. Until one day I stood and looked closely. The hair was gone, beard snow white, squint to see over the bags, deep wrinkles, false teeth and came to the conclusion I was no longer the image that lived in my mind. When we look everyday we do not notice the evolution taking place, so gradual. Reality is a bitch! Great write, Tom!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:49:00 PM
Exactimundo! Thanks, Daniel!
Date: 9/18/2016 6:29:00 PM
ah yes, the reflection in the mirror! i can relate (in the female version). well done, tom!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 9/19/2016 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Ilene!

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