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One word Like a black cat Prowling on a starless night Sneaks past my notice Quiet and still and Unobserved Escaping from my well-intentioned lips “Someday” “We’ll have to get together” “Yes, soon!” “Write me when you get there” “I will!” “Don’t be a stranger” “It’s been too long” “Here’s my phone number” “I’ll call – I promise...” “Someday!” Every emotion has an enemy The enemy of joy is “if only I had done it differently…” The enemy of peace is “what if something bad happens…” The enemy of spontaneity is “when the time is right…” The enemy of I love you is “Someday”

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Date: 6/15/2020 10:32:00 PM
Wow. This one was amazing. I have had these feelings myself. I think you captured the feelings and sentiments expressed here with such great skill. You get my vote for the very top in this one. Take care, friend. Bryan Norton.
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John Watt
Date: 6/15/2020 10:47:00 PM
Bryan, I don't often put dialogue in a poem, but I'm glad you think this one works. Maybe my favorite kind of compliment is to know others have had similar feelings. I wrote this as a reminder to myself because I'm very prone to saying "someday". Thanks for the affirmation, my friend.
Date: 4/14/2020 3:40:00 PM
LOVE this one, John. Into FAVES
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John Watt
Date: 4/14/2020 3:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, my dear friend!
Date: 4/14/2020 3:39:00 PM
I clicked on a dozen poems trying to find where I left off "working my way up" and now guess what? You are on TWO pages, so I don't know if i will ever catch up to older poems by how fast you are putting out new ones. wow. Ok, now to read this one.
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John Watt
Date: 4/14/2020 3:55:00 PM
You really go above and beyond!
Date: 7/10/2016 4:42:00 PM
I so agree! To often we put people and things off until tomorrow! When tomorrow is never guaranteed! Enjoyed reading this! Blessings to you! :)
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John Watt
Date: 10/3/2016 6:32:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words, Christine. Blessings back at ya! Hugs ~ John

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