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Escape Hell

Escape Hell Hot as fu#! Broke as a joke Am I tuff enuff To overcome all this negative stuff? Responsibility galore Yes, even if you’re poor Not poor in spirit Hear my plea Don’t hand me logic based on fallacy Be dialectic with me so we may move on together transcendentally... Jill

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Robert Lindley

Date: 6/27/2016 10:33:00 AM

I GRADE ON MESSAGE , HEART AND SPIRIT EXPRESSED IN A POEM. This one rated tops in all three with me. I say truth outranks all other considerations and equally matches LOVE.. And both are eternal products of divine Light.

Malcolm Dyer

Date: 4/23/2016 4:54:00 AM

With that attitude you shall escape

Jill Spagnola
Date: 4/28/2016 8:30:00 PM

Yay! Malcolm I love your positivity :)peace, my friend ~ jill

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/19/2016 9:13:00 AM

Have been poor , not wealthy now hope in the future , never giving up is the how.... Your fine poem strikes a deep note with me my friend. Short but timely, true and powerful--A7

Robert Lindley
Date: 6/27/2016 10:33:00 AM

Jill Spagnola
Date: 4/28/2016 8:28:00 PM

Good evening Robert:) I am beat but I saw I had missed some comments on this poem...I do not ever want to be received as ungrateful, cause I am the total opposite of that! You are so generous with your grading!:)...peace, love, and light my friend

Vera Duggan

Date: 4/3/2016 2:17:00 AM

Hi Jill, nicely written, broke, well we have been there trying to raise three kids etc. but our latter years are being very kind to us and we are far from poor, the thing is we needed it more when we had the kids and we don't need it so much now but as they say that is life, love the write thank you for sharing and take care ........Vera

Jill Spagnola
Date: 4/28/2016 8:13:00 PM

Great to hear from you Vera:) Thank you for sharing a piece of your life with me..'such is life', so true! Sweet thoughts I send to you and yours...peace, jill

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/18/2016 11:12:00 AM

Perseverance is something each must learn simply to survive. At times we just simply put on blinders to stay focused. This is another excellent write from the inside. Peace my friend:)

Jill Spagnola
Date: 3/18/2016 7:11:00 PM

I appreciate you sharing, therefore, adding to my poetry experience..peace right back to you Daniel :),jill

Constance La France

Date: 3/3/2016 11:07:00 AM

Jill, this is an excellent write and I am loving it 7 ~

Jill Spagnola
Date: 3/3/2016 11:02:00 PM

Constance, you are too generous :)...peace, jill

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2016 10:34:00 PM

Jill, your words are very profound. We are never poor in spirit, but it is hard to hold on until the very end with out grief a 7.

Jill Spagnola
Date: 3/3/2016 10:59:00 PM

Eve, thank you for sweet 7:) and 'getting me'! I know that pain always lies by the riverside ~ Creed....peace, jill