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Escape

Four walls enclose me. I feel a petrified fear as the water slowly rises. Past my ankles, creeping towards my knees I see the calm blue water staring right at me. I am sure this is the end of yet another human being. I can't and will not leave this dammed world, for many stories I hold which have yet to be told. Minutes pass and the water has reached my neck. I have lost hope. I am practically already dead. I am not ready, but I have been forced to be. As I take my final breath, I see a man break the glass that moments ago would have been my end. As he takes me in his arms, I shiver from the cold air. I am safe. I have lived. My end is not near. When is my end? I ask The world has yet to know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/30/2015 9:36:00 PM
Aaliyah, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/30/2015 1:03:00 PM
Aaliyah, I'm thinking one will never know, the question you wish to know at the end. I enjoyed the poem. :), Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2015 9:36:00 AM
- Hey Aaliyah :) - I welcome you to P-Soup - Hope you will find much pleasure here with us :)) - Share your thoughts and words - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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