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Erotic loving

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Erotic loving


Erotically through the 
frustration and longing 
for her I rip the french 
cotton from her waist 
but as the sweat pours 
from my face and to see 
her eyes in surprise as 
she sees the intention 
of what lies in wait. 
Anxiously, I couldn't 
wait to remove the straps 
from around her twin, 
unveiling a part of her 
heaven I've waited to 
explore within. Slowly 
as time passes by with 
our passions burning 
high through this chilling 
spring's night and with 
the frost of steam clouding 
each window panes she 
exhale the pleasures of 
her day.

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  1. Date: 3/3/2012 12:40:00 PM
    I was hesitant to read this one because of the title, but you have managed it with very good taste. Enjoyed. Hugs, Catie :)