Eris, Paris and the Golden Apple

Too bright for sight, This tunnel of light A temple of Mind In a life of Night A ghost of Soul, Too old to know Life is Death is Life again, (Oh, they told me so!) *More experimental than anything

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John Loving Iii

Date: 8/26/2013 6:14:00 PM

yes experimental.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/27/2013 6:21:00 AM

Thanks for the reaffirmation.

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 8/26/2013 4:28:00 PM

Provocative maybe I would put the last line in parenthesis or maybe a dash before it...just a thought....mythological reference always intrigues me..V

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/26/2013 5:05:00 PM

Excellent suggestion, Victoria! I will do just that! Thanks for the feedback; glad you liked it :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2013 1:57:00 PM

Yes, the winter brings the temporary death of the beautiful summer plants but come spring they rise again..Enjoyed reading your creative work...Thanks for the visits to my work..I appreciate you visits there..Sara

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/26/2013 2:04:00 PM

Thank you for visiting my little poetic sanctuary in the corner of the universe also, Sara. I enjoyed reading your work as well :)

April Gabriella

Date: 8/26/2013 1:44:00 PM

I can't seem to soupmail you. Feel free to mail me. :)