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Eres Tan Hermosa

espiritu afin huyo sin razon embriagantes nubes grises bailado y entregado el odor della lluvia colgado alli como un huerfano los agujeros negros en el cielo mortal rieron en la cara abierta un cielo eres tan hermosa

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Francis Osho

Date: 7/27/2016 2:20:00 AM

i meant ei odor. the smell of rain hung there like an orphan. della was intentional. eventually i think it will be a mix of engles apanish italian i mean d romantic languages with abstract sketches. it will b sketchetry.my first buk of sketchetry is in print. will let u know wen it comes out

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2016 8:24:00 AM

I think it is nice if your reader knows the 3 languages, but mixing them together will be confusing for those who don't know italian they will just think you are not educated and can't spell correctly. Even in English it's hard to take the author seriously if there are serious spelling mistakes.

John Hamilton

Date: 7/26/2016 10:42:00 PM

Porque escribas en espanol cuando el sitio esta en ingles? Creo que quieres decir al fin huyo. El olor de la lluvia. contraccion della es italiano. Buen intento, siga adelante!

Francis Osho
Date: 7/27/2016 2:16:00 AM

hi john. i ve seen ppl write in hindi here. sorry if i offended you.see spanish is my 5th lang.i am just translating my own poems frm english so dat i cn learn d lang then start writing fluently without even translating n i like d spanish trans . it sounds better dan engles. ty, keep in touch