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'ere I Sleep

I know she loved me not because she told me but because she showed me. Silky fingers through my hair nibbled kisses everywhere pleasure nigh too much to bear. Wordless whispers in breath soul deep foreordained our fusion to keep thus I know she loved me 'ere I sleep.

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Silpika Kalita

Date: 11/22/2021 3:52:00 AM

Gorgeous. Feelings at the peak. Splendid share. Hugs Silpika

Paul Schneiter
Date: 11/28/2021 9:36:00 PM

Silpika, thank you . . . you're probably too kind (but I love it). Sorry for the delay in answering--computer has been down. Hugs, Paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/7/2021 6:13:00 PM

Hello Paul ... nice verse indeed Paul based on trust and feelings - thanks Paul - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 11/13/2021 8:45:00 PM

Thank you, Lindsay. Yes, "trust and feelings" are operative in this poem and everywhere else. As usual, your comment expresses truth. Hugs, Paul

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/31/2021 12:17:00 AM

It's not always words that express love. It is best expressed by a touch or a look.

Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/31/2021 7:04:00 AM

Thank you, Jenna. It's sweet of you to comment; I appreciate it. I agree: Words are sometimes less than adequate for expressing love (and not as much fun). Hugs, Paul

Deb M

Date: 10/30/2021 9:42:00 PM

That’s lovely Paul….well written! Check your soup mail!!! Debx

Deb M
Date: 10/31/2021 8:24:00 AM

Sent soup mail again Paul. Debx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/31/2021 6:59:00 AM

I value and appreciate your kind comment, Deb M. I hope I am worthy of it. For some reason I'm unable to open your Soup Mail. I'm anxious to read it. Can you send it again? Hugs, Paul