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Erasers Removed Just Like Prayer

. Empty souls enter the room Rush to the waiting desks Answer questions from rote Spirit filling is left (out in street) Erasers no longer in the room Removed just like prayer____ (Most schools no longer have chalk boards and erasers but have electronic equipment)

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Date: 6/23/2010 9:49:00 AM
congrats to you ~Enjoyed this sara~keep the ink on a roll!!!!~Rick
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Paula's contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/5/2010 12:41:00 PM
Good way of comparing erasers taken out along with prayer. Congrats for your HM. lUv, andrea
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:30:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Sara. My poem "In a Broken Dream" is about a guy who has went on a killing spree and killed 12 people. Even his twin brother. Have a wonderful weekend >> James
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:15:00 AM
wow this ones really good liked the ending had a punch to it :) love Jayne
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Date: 6/4/2010 8:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this insightful acrostic, Sara! --nikko :)
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Date: 6/4/2010 7:24:00 PM
enjoyed, hope you have a good night.
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:28:00 PM
Congratulations. You're right and too bad. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:02:00 PM
Congrats for the win
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Date: 6/4/2010 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM with this excellent acrostic. A very original entry. You're spot on too with your observations.
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Date: 6/4/2010 3:35:00 PM
Congrats Sara onyour HM in the Eraser contest with this dramatic write.. so true ..so enjoyed.. now u enjoy your honor.. with luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/4/2010 12:22:00 PM
removed just like a prayer. thats sounds really interesting, Sara. and very true..-always&forever lynette
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